Figure 80: Abbreviating Quote Exercise (Remove Quotes)

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Figure 80: Abbreviating Quotes Exercise (Removing Quotes)

Elisa continues to glance down at the tractor shed where the men where. There is an anxiousness in Elisa. Her “face was eager . . . mature . . . handsome; even her work with the scissors was over-eager, over-powerful.  The chrysanthemum stems seemed too small and easy for her energy” (Steinbeck 221). Steinbeck paints a clear picture as to how religiously Elisa tends her garden. She takes off her glove and places her hands down into the soil. She recognizes that her flowers hadn’t completely bloomed. She starts tending her garden at the sound of her husband’s voice. “He had come near quietly, and he leaned over the wire fence that protected her flower garden from cattle and dogs, and chickens” (Steinbeck 221). It is evident that the fence that protected the flowers was put there also to protect Elisa. It is also clear to say that the protection from the cattle, dogs, and chickens symbolizes protection from outsiders. Henry protected Elisa in the same way she protected her flowers. No one could get close or converse with Elisa. At the sound of his voice is when she can start. Everything had become so traditional that she had become accustomed to waiting until he finished his business to start her daily activity. Henry never included her in any of his business. She was best seen and not heard.

Group Activity

1) Remove everything before the topic sentence, which represents the first underlined sentence.

2) Keep the topic sentence.

3) Keep the quote that supports a statement the student makes directly before it.

4) Remove the lines after the underlined quote.

5) Locate the analysis. Abbreviate the analysis.

Click here for “Third Part: Abbreviating Analysis (Task #3: Abbreviate).”

Copyright 2011 Regina Y. Favors. All Rights Reserved.

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