Below is an excerpt that falls under the comment “Analysis.”
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Figure 83: Sample Passage from Steinbeck’s “Chrysanthemums” (Squaring Your Analysis Exercise)
|“While the man came through the picket gate Elisa ran excitedly along the geranium-bordered path to the back of the house. And she returned carrying a big red flower pot. The gloves were forgotten now. She kneeled on the ground by the starting bed and dug up the sandy soil with her fingers and scooped it into the bright new flower pot. Then she picked up the little pile of shoots she had prepared. With her strong fingers she pressed them in the sand and tamped around them with her knuckles. The man stood over her. ‘I’ll tell you what to do,’ she said. ‘You remember so you can tell the lady.’”|
Figure 83 represents the source text. It is an excerpt from Steinbeck’s work.
1) As a group, compare Figure 82 and Figure 83. I have included the excerpt below for easy access.
Figure 82: Essay Excerpt on “Chrysanthemums” (Squaring Your Analysis Exercise)
|Elisa, inadvertently, let the visitor through the picket gate. She ran to her flower bed gathering the necessary seeds for the pretend woman down the road. She gives the visitor a complete description of how to plant the seeds and the daily activity that goes along with it. After he tells Elisa that it’s not nice to see the stars and listen to the quiet without dinner, ashamed, she is forced to find something for the visitor to do. The visitor’s manner changes and he becomes professional when Elisa brings him two old aluminum saucepans; “Good as new I can fix them. . . . His mouth grew sure and knowing” (Steinbeck 225).|
2) Identify where the student’s summary or analysis is similar to the ideas expressed within the source text.
3) Identify where the student’s summary or analysis is different from the ideas expressed within the source text.
4) Based upon your evaluation, as a group critique the student’s essay.
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