Table 20 falls under the comment “Analysis” and “The FAVORS Step-by-Step Squaring Process.”
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Table 20: Assessment of Student Essay Body Paragraph Sentences (“Chrysanthemums”)
||Student Essay Body Paragraph Sentences|
|Is Elisa doing this in a careless manner, without intending to?||Elisa, inadvertently, let the visitor through the picket gate.|
|Is Elisa doing this in a careless manner, without intending to?||She ran to her flower bed gathering the necessary seeds for the pretend woman down the road.|
|Is Elisa doing this in a careless manner, without intending to?||She gives the visitor a complete description of how to plant the seeds and the daily activity that goes along with it.|
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